vacation memories poems
can you please tell me what you think of my poem so far?
ok i have one more stanza to go but this is it so far:
Where I’m From
I am from school and sports
from homework and track
I am from the good times
(laughing, smiling
with all of my friends)
I am from bad times,
the swimming pool
whose memories pass through my head like waves
I’m from happiness
from family and friends.
I’m from the reunions
and the losses,
from Hurry up! and Come on!
I’m from going
with a spring in my step
and leaving for better or for worse.
I’m from vacations,
corn on the cob and hot dogs.
From the campsite
to the river,
the campfire under the stars.
ok i finished the last stanza here it is:
These moments form me
as a child forms clay
every moment changes me
wheather its a fall
or rising up
These are the moments that I am from.
I like it because it is unique unlike other boring poems. It grabs me. The rhythm of the poem and attitude is the best. Out of a 10, I rated it a 10! Superb!
“I Miss China”
